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twisted torn,
a battalion of thoughts March through my head.

flights of robins resound,
broken cells Tumble down.

pain burning inside out,
water streams Dissolves off.

believe in those few good men,
a reality the mind Tried to bend.

leave bread Crumbs of affection,
skip rocks of despair across the Crystalline lake.

fabricate My world.
piece Together me.
admire Your handiwork.

if you could,
would you start anew?

if you could,
would you leave without a glance back?

could I?
©2006-2009 ~xvmysteryvx
:iconxvmysteryvx:

Author's Comments

yes, new poetry. amazing huh? got an itch to write and that's what i got. good luck to me

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:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:
And you wrote very well!! This is an awesome piece!!!

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I am beautifully broken...tragically twisted..and sinfully shattered....I am me.
:iconxvmysteryvx:
thank you very very much!! ^.^ your nice words make me smile.

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Dream me up sweet illusionist....
:iconsablekaine:
Good Job, Dani!

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In remembrance... as a reminder.
:iconxvmysteryvx:
thankies

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Dream me up sweet illusionist....
:iconshattered-defender:
Very nice, I like it very much.

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~Here I stand, protecting what I love, with all I possess.~
:iconxvmysteryvx:
thank you so much.

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Dream me up sweet illusionist....

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